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Trapped in a high rise residential building a group of neighbors must learn to work together to escape their culprit.
I agree with craig, because after reading your logline I still have no idea whether this is a horror movie (Like Friday the Thirteenth), or an action movie (Like Die Hard) That will come from describing the bad guy, is he a serial killer a robber? a stressed out employee? Are they being held hostageRead more
I agree with craig, because after reading your logline I still have no idea whether this is a horror movie (Like Friday the Thirteenth), or an action movie (Like Die Hard)
That will come from describing the bad guy, is he a serial killer a robber? a stressed out employee? Are they being held hostage? Are they just in the wrong place at the wrong time?
Here would be an example of a logline with more specifics:
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“When a crazed killer shuts down the power, a failed engineering student must rally his stoner friends to help him get the high rise elevators working to escape the madman”
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Of course yours would be different but as you can see in my example by describing the ‘culprit’ as a crazed killer, we now know what genre’ the movie is.
A teenage boy is sucked into an ancient world when he finds himself lost in the ruins of a lost civilization, and hunted by by monsters of the dark.
This is a situation... What he must do about it is the story. The logline will be improved if the lead character has a stated goal.
This is a situation… What he must do about it is the story. The logline will be improved if the lead character has a stated goal.
See lessThe last member of an ancient race must learn to once again trust humans. When a geeky teenage boy is the only chance to save everything she knows.
You should give us the stakes. What is it she will lose? What will cause her to lose it? in other words, "When this specific thing happens" the last member of an ancient race must...
You should give us the stakes. What is it she will lose? What will cause her to lose it? in other words, “When this specific thing happens” the last member of an ancient race must…
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