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What is the conflict? What is the lead characters goal? What is standing in the way of that goal?
What is the conflict?
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What is standing in the way of that goal?
Your body is the asset, Social class is the Pyramid Scheme. California is the Guinea Pig & Chance is the Prodigal Son.
"When California bases it's citizenship status on body type, an overweight teen rally's the socially awkward and the homely to bring the ugly stick down on the states Tyrannical system."
“When California bases it’s citizenship status on body type, an overweight teen rally’s the socially awkward and the homely to bring the ugly stick down on the states Tyrannical system.”
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From reading this, it seems that the absents fathers return is what sets the story in motion... If this is the case I would use that to begin your logoline ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "When her absent father returns, a (adjective) historicRead more
From reading this, it seems that the absents fathers return is what sets the story in motion… If this is the case I would use that to begin your logoline
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“When her absent father returns, a (adjective) historical researcher must…”
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