1. Posted: December 2, 2016In:

    Boy meets girl. Boy falls in love. Girl doesn’t.

    Richiev Singularity

    One of the first loglines I wrote was something like "Two young lovers fall in love... it doesn't end well" Romeo and Juliet. I believe short loglines can work if there is a punchline or if you are playing off a theme that's well known.

    One of the first loglines I wrote was something like “Two young lovers fall in love… it doesn’t end well” Romeo and Juliet.

    I believe short loglines can work if there is a punchline or if you are playing off a theme that’s well known.

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  2. Posted: December 1, 2016In:

    Cherry has a unique condition: her blood sends anyone who sees or smells it into a bloodthirsty mania. When she hears of a cure, she sets off across the country, turning the road trip into a zombified hell.

    Richiev Singularity

    The word unique suggests something is singular. If the condition is unique to the lead character, then she is the only one to have this condition. If that is the case how did someone come up with a cure to a condition only she has?

    The word unique suggests something is singular. If the condition is unique to the lead character, then she is the only one to have this condition. If that is the case how did someone come up with a cure to a condition only she has?

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  3. Posted: November 29, 2016In:

    From a mostly-automated solar farm orbiting Earth, a programmer with survivalist inclinations once ridiculed by those closest to him strives from afar to save his ex-wife wife and young son from the sudden outbreak of nuclear war.

    Richiev Singularity

    You buried the lead: Start with the Nuclear War :)

    You buried the lead: Start with the Nuclear War 🙂

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