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  1. Posted: October 31, 2016In: Comedy

    A college dropout turn travel agent living in Manhattan is faking his way through life. He receives news that his family’s dilapidated farm in Outback Australia, is facing foreclosure. Desperate to save the farm and fulfill his dream, he books an ageing reality TV star a vacation there, passing it off as a five-star resort. He and his family scramble to hide the truth, as they try to snag an investment from the celebrity.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 1, 2016 at 11:59 am

    "When he tricks a well respected celebrity into believing his family farm is a trendy resort, a well meaning shyster must give his unsuspecting guest the time of his life in the hopes other celebrities will follow suit and the farm will be saved from a greedy local bank."

    “When he tricks a well respected celebrity into believing his family farm is a trendy resort, a well meaning shyster must give his unsuspecting guest the time of his life in the hopes other celebrities will follow suit and the farm will be saved from a greedy local bank.”

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  2. Posted: October 31, 2016In: Comedy

    A college dropout turn travel agent living in Manhattan is faking his way through life. He receives news that his family’s dilapidated farm in Outback Australia, is facing foreclosure. Desperate to save the farm and fulfill his dream, he books an ageing reality TV star a vacation there, passing it off as a five-star resort. He and his family scramble to hide the truth, as they try to snag an investment from the celebrity.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on October 31, 2016 at 3:15 pm

    You are still giving us to much backstory and not telling us the actual story. (Unless the movie is 2 hours of the dropout trying to convince a celebrity to book a vacation at his family farm)

    You are still giving us to much backstory and not telling us the actual story. (Unless the movie is 2 hours of the dropout trying to convince a celebrity to book a vacation at his family farm)

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  3. Posted: October 31, 2016In: Crime

    ?A once-promising former boxer turns to highline crime to provide for his cancer-stricken mother. But when an Aryan Brotherhood kingpin threatens to kill her and the mother of his unborn child, he must find a way out while keeping his family safe.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on October 31, 2016 at 3:12 pm

    Again, I would start the logline with the Aryan Brotherhood threatening to kill the mother of his child. I would drop the Cancer angle since it is backstory and does not relate to the goal.

    Again, I would start the logline with the Aryan Brotherhood threatening to kill the mother of his child. I would drop the Cancer angle since it is backstory and does not relate to the goal.

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