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  1. Posted: October 29, 2016In: Comedy

    A vengeful lonely guy consults to his multiple psychopathic personalities, who all either support him, frustrate him or simply do random stuff, while he is deciding whether he should kill his cheating girlfriend or forgive her.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on October 31, 2016 at 12:09 pm

    "When he catches the love of his life cheating on him, a recovering psychotic stops taking his meds which triggers an internal war with his multiple personalities, between those who wish to kill her and those who wish to forgive."

    “When he catches the love of his life cheating on him, a recovering psychotic stops taking his meds which triggers an internal war with his multiple personalities, between those who wish to kill her and those who wish to forgive.”

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  2. Posted: October 29, 2016In: Comedy

    A vengeful lonely guy consults to his multiple psychopathic personalities, who all either support him, frustrate him or simply do random stuff, while he is deciding whether he should kill his cheating girlfriend or forgive her.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on October 30, 2016 at 1:50 am

    Is this for a movie short or a full length feature?

    Is this for a movie short or a full length feature?

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  3. Posted: October 28, 2016In: Examples

    A team of young superheroes carry out covert missions to prove that they are worthy to join the Justice League.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on October 29, 2016 at 1:09 pm

    'Struggle' is a bad word for a logline, It's always a redflag. I would try a different word, one that isn't so passive. Here is a quick re-edit of your logline: (By the way you have a lot of space left to add detail since your word count is so low) ----- "A team of young sidekicks fight to prove theRead more

    ‘Struggle’ is a bad word for a logline, It’s always a redflag. I would try a different word, one that isn’t so passive. Here is a quick re-edit of your logline: (By the way you have a lot of space left to add detail since your word count is so low)
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    “A team of young sidekicks fight to prove they’re worthy to join the Justice League.”

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