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  1. Posted: October 12, 2016In: SciFi

    A 19th century jaded farm boy finds an alien ring and is thrown back and forth in time: but on his way back, the boy encounters love, wisdom and, of course, evil time-travelling twins working for a malicious time-crime boss.

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on October 12, 2016 at 1:00 pm

    I believe the inciting incident would be the lead character becoming captive in time.As a result the lead must find a way back to his own timeline as a goal. While it may seem like finding the ring is the inciting incident, the ring is just the plot device. It could have been a magic brooch, discoveRead more

    I believe the inciting incident would be the lead character becoming captive in time.

    As a result the lead must find a way back to his own timeline as a goal. While it may seem like finding the ring is the inciting incident, the ring is just the plot device. It could have been a magic brooch, discovering HG Wells laboratory or anything.

    How about this attempt:
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    “When he becomes trapped in time, a naive farm boy must discover how to get back to his own timeline, all while evading malicious time-boss who’s after the alien artifact he discovered.”
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    Hope that helped, good luck with this.

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  2. Posted: October 11, 2016In: Thriller

    Seeing her father assassinated, Princess escapes to search the land for her exiled mother to learn the djinn arts to take revenge and save her people.?

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on October 12, 2016 at 3:28 am

    I like it

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  3. Posted: October 11, 2016In: Examples

    When a NY cop visits his estranged wife at her LA office building, he stumbles into a terrorist heist and must rescue the employee hostages.

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    Added an answer on October 11, 2016 at 6:33 pm

    "When terrorist take over his wife's office building. A shoe less NY Cop must outsmart the bad guys and free his wife from their clutches."?

    “When terrorist take over his wife’s office building. A shoe less NY Cop must outsmart the bad guys and free his wife from their clutches.”?

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