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A terminally ill girl stops taking her medication to end her suffering, only to feel better discovering she is a victim of her mother’s munchausen by proxy
If escaping is the goal it should be added to the logline.
If escaping is the goal it should be added to the logline.
See lessA terminally ill girl stops taking her medication to end her suffering, only to feel better discovering she is a victim of her mother’s munchausen by proxy
Is this the story, or is the story what happens after this event?
Is this the story, or is the story what happens after this event?
See lessA new-born prince abandoned in the wild mountains after a dream terrifies his Grandfather King, survives and returns 18 Years later as the Royal Games Gladiator Winner and to avenge and take the kingdom
In order for this to be a story; the lead character must have a goal. Something should stand in the way of that goal. It also helps to have an inciting incident that's not 18 years old.Also the way this logline is written it's unclear who's the lead character. At first reading I thought it was the yRead more
In order for this to be a story; the lead character must have a goal. Something should stand in the way of that goal. It also helps to have an inciting incident that’s not 18 years old.
Also the way this logline is written it’s unclear who’s the lead character. At first reading I thought it was the young prince… but after reading it again I realize the young prince disappears through 18 years of the story. That is a long time for a lead character to be gone from a story.
This makes me believe the Grandfather King is the lead character. In which the king should have the goal, and something standing in the way of the goal.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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