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When Katy?s writing career is at it?s last straw, she goes to China and dates a local as inspiration for her book, only to discover her relationship is part of a reality TV show.
The problem with this logline is, it has to be read a couple of times to understand the irony. 1: A down on her luck writer moves to China to find inspiration for her book (Presumably about interracial relationships) 2: She finds some unsuspecting patsy and pretends to date him while actually just uRead more
The problem with this logline is, it has to be read a couple of times to understand the irony.
1: A down on her luck writer moves to China to find inspiration for her book (Presumably about interracial relationships)
2: She finds some unsuspecting patsy and pretends to date him while actually just using him.
3: She slowly falls in love.
4: Only to discover she was the patsy all along, because he was using her as part of some reality tv show.
5: And if it’s in the form of romantic comedy, both will have fallen in love for real and both will discover the other’s deception just when the are about to declare their love for one another.
The only real question is, how much will the audience know? Is the audience in on the deception or is it a big reveal? (Because that will affect how the logline is written)
See lessIn a modern world full of super humans with special powers and abilities , An ordinary young boy who was born with no power dreams and works hard in order to become a strong super hero.
How about this try, I added an inciting incident and a more specific goal, yours would be different but the logline principle would still be the same: ----- "After he's mocked by his classmates for not having super powers, a beleaguered Normal set's on a regimen to mold himself into a hero and defeaRead more
How about this try, I added an inciting incident and a more specific goal, yours would be different but the logline principle would still be the same:
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See less“After he’s mocked by his classmates for not having super powers, a beleaguered Normal set’s on a regimen to mold himself into a hero and defeat the class bully, Kidd Evil.”
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Hope that helped, good luck with this!
After being abandoned by his wife, a middle aged British man relocates to Bangkok and works as a teacher; this move gives him many hilarious experiences.
When you say, there isn't any conflict... I have to be a little worried. Rules are made to be broken, That is true but the one rule that would be hard to break is the rule "Story is Conflict" Not only should your overall story have conflict, every episode should have conflict and every scene shouldRead more
When you say, there isn’t any conflict… I have to be a little worried.
Rules are made to be broken, That is true but the one rule that would be hard to break is the rule “Story is Conflict”
Not only should your overall story have conflict, every episode should have conflict and every scene should have conflict. I am not sure how you can get around that rule.
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