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  1. Posted: September 6, 2016In: Adventure

    When the lands fairest Princess father is killed and throne taken by an Evil Suitor, her exiled mother she never knew returns to teach her the magical arts to take back her Kingdom

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 7, 2016 at 2:58 am

    "When her father is assassinated, a sheltered princess must search the land for her exiled mother in order to learn the forbidden arts and extract revenge on the usurper."

    “When her father is assassinated, a sheltered princess must search the land for her exiled mother in order to learn the forbidden arts and extract revenge on the usurper.”

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  2. Posted: September 5, 2016In: Comedy

    After his divorce, a middle aged man needs a new lease of life. He achieves it by moving to a foreign country and changing his career.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 6, 2016 at 11:39 am

    I have to agree with dpg on this one. What country does you lead move to? For an example; in the movie 'Under a Tuscan Sun" A middle aged woman moves to Tuscany to begin again... The country she moves to in many ways becomes the 'hook' of the story. While your country may not be the hook of your stoRead more

    I have to agree with dpg on this one. What country does you lead move to? For an example; in the movie ‘Under a Tuscan Sun” A middle aged woman moves to Tuscany to begin again… The country she moves to in many ways becomes the ‘hook’ of the story.

    While your country may not be the hook of your story, it will still give the readers a strong visualization of the setting just by giving us the name of the country.

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  3. Posted: September 6, 2016In: Comedy

    After deciding they are together for the long haul, recent college graduates and lovers, Wyatt and Emma, have their relationship tested as they move across the country for a job that doesn’t actually exist.

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    Added an answer on September 6, 2016 at 8:44 am

    Since a couple wouldn't move across the country for a job that doesn't exist, it seems likely they do not know the job doesn't exist. That means the job not existing would probably be a big reveal, like Wally World being closed. If that's the case, I would leave it out of the logline.I would leave aRead more

    Since a couple wouldn’t move across the country for a job that doesn’t exist, it seems likely they do not know the job doesn’t exist.
    That means the job not existing would probably be a big reveal, like Wally World being closed. If that’s the case, I would leave it out of the logline.

    I would leave any big reveal or third act surprise out of the logline.

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