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When an impoverished single mom is diagnosed with cancer, her teenage son solicits treatment donations by attempting to break the Guinness World Record for continuous wakeboarding of 12 straight hours.
I would begin the logline like this: "When his mom is diagnosed with cancer, and impoverished?wakeboarder?vows to break the world record in order to pay for her treatments.?" This makes the logline more personal. (Just curious, in order to wakeboard you need a boat. Is this really a sport that a pooRead more
I would begin the logline like this:
“When his mom is diagnosed with cancer, and impoverished?wakeboarder?vows to break the world record in order to pay for her treatments.?”
This makes the logline more personal.
(Just curious, in order to wakeboard you need a boat. Is this really a sport that a poor person would do?)
See lessA corrupt PR agent flees to his sleepy hometown after inheriting his father’s derelict hotel and unites with the mischievous ghost of his suicidal first guest to scare off a vindictive property developer.
One more thing. Since your lead character is a PR agent. I would use that in the script and logline. His hotel is losing money because it is haunted... So as a PR agent, he uses his PR skills to convince people to stay at the hotel. That way his job and skills would match the problem.
One more thing.
Since your lead character is a PR agent. I would use that in the script and logline.
See lessHis hotel is losing money because it is haunted… So as a PR agent, he uses his PR skills to convince people to stay at the hotel.
That way his job and skills would match the problem.
A corrupt PR agent flees to his sleepy hometown after inheriting his father’s derelict hotel and unites with the mischievous ghost of his suicidal first guest to scare off a vindictive property developer.
I would drop the part about fleeing to his hometown, unless you are going to tell us what he is fleeing from. I would begin the logline something like this. "When he inherits a haunted hotel, a sleazy PR agent must..."
I would drop the part about fleeing to his hometown, unless you are going to tell us what he is fleeing from.
I would begin the logline something like this.
“When he inherits a haunted hotel, a sleazy PR agent must…”
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