1. Posted: September 1, 2016In:

    When a young man takes a decision to marry against a will of his controlling and psychotic mother, his girlfriend mysteriously disappears.

    Richiev Singularity

    I agree with the above, this is just the set-up, the story would be what he does about it.

    I agree with the above, this is just the set-up, the story would be what he does about it.

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  2. Posted: August 30, 2016In:

    When a teenage girl is refused by her school girlfriends for still being a virgin, she decides to commit suicide when a sex offender kidnaps her.

    Richiev Singularity

    I am not sure what you mean when you say, she is 'refused' by her school girlfriends'I would try a different word, maybe shunned might fit better.

    I am not sure what you mean when you say, she is ‘refused’ by her school girlfriends’

    I would try a different word, maybe shunned might fit better.

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  3. Posted: August 30, 2016In:

    When a renowned, but greedy publisher, plots a murder to own a would-be hit manuscript,his bitter deputy plots two, but both meet their match in the aspiring author-who happens to be a WWII vet.

    Richiev Singularity

    A logline should be written from the perspective of the lead character. I cannot tell from your logline who the lead character is because it keeps switching perspectives.

    A logline should be written from the perspective of the lead character. I cannot tell from your logline who the lead character is because it keeps switching perspectives.

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