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  1. Posted: August 25, 2016In: Fantasy

    In a world twisted by the DNA Wars a young warrior must learn to control her changing mutation while surviving the monsters of her nightmares as she tries to reach the free city.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on August 26, 2016 at 12:19 pm

    Why now? Why did she choose this moment to try to reach the free city? Why not yesterday or last year? What prompted this action at this particular moment?

    Why now?

    Why did she choose this moment to try to reach the free city? Why not yesterday or last year? What prompted this action at this particular moment?

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  2. Posted: August 26, 2016In: Comedy

    After a newly engaged woman realizes she has no friends to invite to her wedding, she sets out to make some adult friendships while balancing a crappy job and her own awkwardness.

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    Added an answer on August 26, 2016 at 10:32 am

    You should know there was a movie done with almost the exact same premise, except it was a man instead of a woman. It was titled "I love you man" and was quite clever. It was filmed in the formula of a romantic comedy but instead a man and a woman, it was two men. The idea was, groom to be has no maRead more

    You should know there was a movie done with almost the exact same premise, except it was a man instead of a woman.

    It was titled “I love you man” and was quite clever. It was filmed in the formula of a romantic comedy but instead a man and a woman, it was two men. The idea was, groom to be has no male friends and needs a best man.

    That does not mean you should abandon your idea, just that you should know there is a movie with the same set-up and hopefully you will find your idea has a completely different take.

    Hope that helped.

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  3. Posted: August 25, 2016In: Comedy

    [Revised] A manipulative cat uses trickery and the dark arts to exact revenge upon an unappreciative mother, disrupting her big presentation.

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    Added an answer on August 25, 2016 at 2:41 pm

    If you say someone is going to exact revenge, you should tell us for what. In fact that will be your inciting incident. The action must be compelling, because revenge isn't always a likable trait. So the action the lead is getting revenge for must be compelling enough for us, the audience to root foRead more

    If you say someone is going to exact revenge, you should tell us for what. In fact that will be your inciting incident. The action must be compelling, because revenge isn’t always a likable trait.
    So the action the lead is getting revenge for must be compelling enough for us, the audience to root for the lead character to succeed in their revenge.

    Hope that helped, good luck with this.

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