1. Posted: July 17, 2016In:

    An elderly man, lost in a giant maze is transformed into his younger self; but when he discovers his new world is also a slave trade; he must find the Maze Master who holds the key to freedom for all.

    Richiev Singularity

    "His new world is also a slave trade..." ?not sure what that means.

    “His new world is also a slave trade…” ?not sure what that means.

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  2. Posted: July 15, 2016In:

    Robots were not the cause of mankind’s destruction. Instead, they will attempt to bring us back from extinction.

    Richiev Singularity

    This is not a logline. A logline needs a lead character, who has a goal. The goal is usually brought about by an event which happens early on in the story. Because story is conflict, there needs to be someone or something standing in the way of the lead character achieving his goal, finally there neRead more

    This is not a logline.

    A logline needs a lead character, who has a goal. The goal is usually brought about by an event which happens early on in the story. Because story is conflict, there needs to be someone or something standing in the way of the lead character achieving his goal, finally there needs to be stakes, a terrible consequence if the lead character fails to achieve his goal… all in about 30 words.

    Good luck with your concept, sounds interesting.

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  3. Posted: July 14, 2016In:

    After her daughter is brutally assaulted and raped by a group of racist boys at school, a tough Vietnamese beautician seeks to torture the boys’ mothers at her beauty salon.

    Richiev Singularity

    "When the spoiled rich boy who raped her daughter is freed, an angry Vietnamese woman kidnaps the boys powerful mother who bribed the judge."

    “When the spoiled rich boy who raped her daughter is freed, an angry Vietnamese woman kidnaps the boys powerful mother who bribed the judge.”

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