1. Posted: July 9, 2016In:

    Wanting to go legit a young drug dealer must do one last run to rescue her sister being held hostage by her boss; knowing she be going to be killed.

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    When his sister's held hostage, a drug dealer who's trying to go legit must do one last job if he's to save her.

    When his sister’s held hostage, a drug dealer who’s trying to go legit must do one last job if he’s to save her.

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  2. Posted: July 8, 2016In:

    When a nice holiday cruise turns bloody, a detective and failed parent must take down the threat and regain his self-worth.

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    You should make the goal more immediate. Someone he loves is in danger and he must save them.

    You should make the goal more immediate. Someone he loves is in danger and he must save them.

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  3. Posted: July 8, 2016In:

    When a bitten-to-death passenger is found dead in his cabin, a dad with son-issues aspires to catch the killer and redeem himself to his son.

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    The logline is a bit awkward to read. ?You should try saying the same thing but in a more readable way. Before: When a bitten-to-death passenger is found... After: When a passenger is bitten to death...

    The logline is a bit awkward to read. ?You should try saying the same thing but in a more readable way.

    Before: When a bitten-to-death passenger is found…
    After: When a passenger is bitten to death…

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