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A rebellious spy returns to his hometown when “save the Earth”-promoting terrorists take it over for ransom.
"When his hometown is captured by terrorists, a rebellious spy infiltrates the enemy's lines to save his sister who's trapped by the insurgents."
“When his hometown is captured by terrorists, a rebellious spy infiltrates the enemy’s lines to save his sister who’s trapped by the insurgents.”
See lessAfter a failed stint as a professional motorcycle racer, a middle aged man, on the verge of losing everything, takes to the streets and races his way up the street racing ladder.
"When his home is to be foreclosed, a disgraced professional cyclist takes up illegal street racing to pay off the bank."
“When his home is to be foreclosed, a disgraced professional cyclist takes up illegal street racing to pay off the bank.”
See lessA mute street performer with PTSD, trapped and on the run in war-torn Europe, must use his wits and talents, and enlist the help of the French Resistance, to change the course of the second World War.
1: A man living with PTSD-inflicted mutism... this line is hard to read and should be changed. 2:?Trapped and on the run... These are two opposite situations. If you are trapped you can't move, if you are on the run you are on the move. You should pick one or the other. 3: must use his wits and taleRead more
1: A man living with PTSD-inflicted mutism… this line is hard to read and should be changed.
2:?Trapped and on the run… These are two opposite situations. If you are trapped you can’t move, if you are on the run you are on the move. You should pick one or the other.
3: must use his wits and talents… This line should be dropped, it tells us nothing about the story.
4: to change the course of the second world war… This should be dropped.
What’s missing from this logline is what specifically the lead character must do. Kill an important Nazi General? Help a German scientist defect? Build a time machine and kill Hitler? When you give us the lead character’s specific goal, we won’t have to be told that it will change the course of the second world war, we will know it from reading the logline.
Hope this helps, good luck with this!
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