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When an 11 year old accidentally clones himself, he is swept up in an audacious plot to kidnap world leaders and must use all his ingenuity to save his father, his friends, his unexpected twin and the world.
You have a little too much going on.Also, I'm not sure how this all connects; because of this, the logline seems jumbled.I believe the first step to making this logline a bit more clear would be to change the inciting incident and work from there. ----- "When ?an 11 year old boy discovers a plot toRead more
You have a little too much going on.
Also, I’m not sure how this all connects; because of this, the logline seems jumbled.
I believe the first step to making this logline a bit more clear would be to change the inciting incident and work from there.
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“When ?an 11 year old boy discovers a plot to kidnap world leaders and replace them with clones…” (Then tell us what he must do)
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Hope that helps, good luck with this!
After his friends are arrested for robbing the convenience store he works at as an inside job, he must rob his own workplace in order to bail them out before they rat on him.
I'm not sure if the robbers should be his friends. "When a group of Bullies are arrested for attempting to rob his convenience store, a meek clerk has 24 hours to come up with their bail money or they'll rat him out for his part in the robbery."
I’m not sure if the robbers should be his friends.
“When a group of Bullies are arrested for attempting to rob his convenience store, a meek clerk has 24 hours to come up with their bail money or they’ll rat him out for his part in the robbery.”
See lessAn angel is brutalized by the police, and now his daughter, and humanity must fight him in order to survive.
Is it the Daughter; the Daughter of the Angel or the Policeman?
Is it the Daughter; the Daughter of the Angel or the Policeman?
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