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When a journalist discovers a cult crucifying men in the desert, he believes he has the story of a lifetime if he can live to tell it..
"When a journalist discovers a cult crucifying men in the desert, he..." ...must 'do this' in order to 'stop that' or else 'this bad thing will happen"
“When a journalist discovers a cult crucifying men in the desert, he…”
…must ‘do this’ in order to ‘stop that’ or else ‘this bad thing will happen”
See lessWhen a archeology student learns his mentor has been killed after he discovered the garden of eden he must stop an eccentric billionaire from turning the tree of knowledge into a drug for the wealthy.
Why? Why must he stop the rich from getting hooked on a drug?
Why?
Why must he stop the rich from getting hooked on a drug?
See lessWhen one of his tenants is found murdered, a young and na?ve landlord must find a killer lurking in a secret part of the building, or risk bankruptcy.
1: Young and naive is redundant you should pick one or the other.2: "...Or risk bankruptcy" comes out of nowhere. If it's important to the story you should tell us how a tenant being murdered and bankruptcy correlate.It just seems odd that there is a killer is on the loose and the lead character isRead more
1: Young and naive is redundant you should pick one or the other.
2: “…Or risk bankruptcy” comes out of nowhere. If it’s important to the story you should tell us how a tenant being murdered and bankruptcy correlate.
It just seems odd that there is a killer is on the loose and the lead character is like, “Oh no, the banks might come after me!”
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