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During an apocalypse, a nine year old albino boy finds himself in an evaluation limbo with 393 people; one upper class and one lower class citizen from each country in the world, where they must conquer five world problems together in order to save the universe from destruction. ------ Richiev says:Read more
During an apocalypse, a nine year old albino boy finds himself in an evaluation limbo with 393 people; one upper class and one lower class citizen from each country in the world, where they must conquer five world problems together in order to save the universe from destruction.
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Richiev says:?Now the next thing I would add to the logline is who’s doing the evaluation; is it God? Is it a supreme alien race? Is it future mankind… However if this is a secret or a ‘big reveal’ at the end of the movie then of course ignore this advice.
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The first thing I would do is choose a lead character. 394 people is way too many lead characters.
The first thing I would do is choose a lead character. 394 people is way too many lead characters.
See lessA 30-something man is frustrated with his life and family and seems unable to make sense of it all until he meets a lady that wants to end it all.
Meeting the lady sounds like the event that inspires the lead to action. I would begin your logline with that and then tell us what the lead character must do upon meeting the suicidal woman.
Meeting the lady sounds like the event that inspires the lead to action. I would begin your logline with that and then tell us what the lead character must do upon meeting the suicidal woman.
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