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A powerful, critically acclaimed director pushes a naive, up-and-coming actor into the realm of psychosis, all for the sake of the character.
From the logline it seems the director is the lead character, the one with the goal and moving the story forwards. If so, why do we want the director to succeed? What is our motivation to like the lead character.
From the logline it seems the director is the lead character, the one with the goal and moving the story forwards. If so, why do we want the director to succeed? What is our motivation to like the lead character.
See lessWhen a scientist invents a vaccine for a virus that devastated the United States and uses it to build a deadly army, her former student must lead a special forces team to her hidden base in the Rocky Mountains in order to get the vaccine in the right hands.
You should write the logline from one perspective. In your logline, you start from the perspective of the scientist and we think the scientist is the lead character, then you switch to the student and now we wonder who the lead character is.
You should write the logline from one perspective. In your logline, you start from the perspective of the scientist and we think the scientist is the lead character, then you switch to the student and now we wonder who the lead character is.
See lessDying single father on the run from his criminal past must come to grips with series of choices that led him to commit murder in order to procure a new suitable home for his young son with special needs.
It seems as though the main goal of the story is to find a good home for his son. I would concentrate on that goal for the purpose of your logline.I would drop the line, "on the run from his criminal past." way too vague. He should be on the run from a specific person. ----- "When he's diagnosed witRead more
It seems as though the main goal of the story is to find a good home for his son. I would concentrate on that goal for the purpose of your logline.
I would drop the line, “on the run from his criminal past.” way too vague. He should be on the run from a specific person.
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“When he’s diagnosed with cancer, a terminally ill convict escapes from prison, determined to secure his special needs son a good home before a ruthless marshal with a grudge catches him and locks him back up.”