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  1. Posted: March 1, 2016In: Drama

    A retired undefeated boxing champion William leads a simple life after losing all his money and a former boxing champion Michael insults him in a live press conference which leads the battle between their sons as they become rivals. The outcome of the battle leads Michael to challenge William to fight him in the ring and he accepts it.

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    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on March 2, 2016 at 12:55 pm

    It would help if you distinguish the protagonist from the antagonist. Protagonist: A former boxing champion Antagonist: A former boxing champion Or at least consolidate. "When their son's square off, two former boxing rival's.... Hope that helps.

    It would help if you distinguish the protagonist from the antagonist.

    Protagonist: A former boxing champion
    Antagonist: A former boxing champion

    Or

    at least consolidate.

    “When their son’s square off, two former boxing rival’s….

    Hope that helps.

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  2. Posted: February 29, 2016In: Comedy

    ANALYZE FISH-A greedy shrink Dolphin tries to let a depressed Shark crime boss commit suicide and blame a rival crime family.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 29, 2016 at 12:26 pm

    You haven't given us a motivation. Nir's ?logine attempt helps us understand how the greedy Dolphin would financially benefit by convincing his patient to commit suicide.How about this:----- A greedy dolphin shrink begins to have second thoughts when after he's offered a million clams to manipulateRead more

    You haven’t given us a motivation. Nir’s ?logine attempt helps us understand how the greedy Dolphin would financially benefit by convincing his patient to commit suicide.

    How about this:

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    A greedy dolphin shrink begins to have second thoughts when after he’s offered a million clams to manipulate a depressed loan shark into committing suicide, he begins developing a friendship with his patient.”

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  3. Posted: February 22, 2016In: Comedy

    When an insecure screenwriter writing a screenplay about Al Capone is captured by Capone himself, he must escape the gangster’s clutches before he is tortured into writing a screenplay he hates and shot in the head.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 22, 2016 at 2:09 pm

    "When he's forced by Al Capone to write the worst screenplay in the history of screenplays, a kidnapped screenwriter must find a way to write the script, fend off Al Capone's horny mistress, while figuring out how to fake his death so he can escape."

    “When he’s forced by Al Capone to write the worst screenplay in the history of screenplays, a kidnapped screenwriter must find a way to write the script, fend off Al Capone’s horny mistress, while figuring out how to fake his death so he can escape.”

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