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  1. Posted: February 16, 2016In: Drama

    The Devil at My Door. A young woman is visited by a messenger with news about the death of her husband. The messenger, she perceives is the Devil himself. Everything she knows about the fighting in the Middle East was grizzly and tragic. From the media and her husband?s letters, she learned to have nothing but contempt and hatred for these tyrants who had no regard for their own people. And now, one of these people were at her door.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on February 16, 2016 at 2:37 pm

    From you new description, it seems as if Dahni is the lead character, he is the one with the goal; he is determined to prove to the widow that not all "his people" are martyrs. As such the logline should be written to reflect that.

    From you new description, it seems as if Dahni is the lead character, he is the one with the goal; he is determined to prove to the widow that not all “his people” are martyrs. As such the logline should be written to reflect that.

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  2. Posted: February 16, 2016In: Drama

    The Devil at My Door. A young woman is visited by a messenger with news about the death of her husband. The messenger, she perceives is the Devil himself. Everything she knows about the fighting in the Middle East was grizzly and tragic. From the media and her husband?s letters, she learned to have nothing but contempt and hatred for these tyrants who had no regard for their own people. And now, one of these people were at her door.

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    Added an answer on February 16, 2016 at 11:50 am

    Is this a movie short? Just curious because your logline describes a scene, not a story. ?Sometimes a movie short is one scene so I was just wondering if this was the entire story.

    Is this a movie short?

    Just curious because your logline describes a scene, not a story. ?Sometimes a movie short is one scene so I was just wondering if this was the entire story.

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  3. Posted: February 16, 2016In: Drama

    Kole Owen is a second generation champion wrestler who after his father’s death discovers his father’s whole other family; a new sister and a bi-racial autistic toddler half brother.

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    Added an answer on February 16, 2016 at 11:36 am

    How about this:"When he discovers his deceased father had a second family, a wrestling champion fights for his fathers estate but complications arise when he begins to get to know his step family."

    How about this:

    “When he discovers his deceased father had a second family, a wrestling champion fights for his fathers estate but complications arise when he begins to get to know his step family.”

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