1. Posted: February 19, 2016In:

    After being transported to a surreal world where she accidently kills the first person she meets, a young girl must team up with three strangers to kill again in order to get back home. (The Wizard of Oz)

    Richiev Singularity

    I kinda thought the logline was funny :)

    I kinda thought the logline was funny 🙂

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  2. Posted: February 20, 2016In:

    Rio, a waitress in a small Texas town, graduated high school last week, survived being burned alive yesterday and today discovered the reason why. She is descended from Quetzalcoatl, Aztec god of Light and Knowledge and their bloodline has been hunted by rival god, Tezcatlipoca, Aztec god of War and his descendants for millennia. After learning more about her lineage, Rio decides to take the fight to the enemy and make the hunters the prey.

    Richiev Singularity

    I see where you are going with this. And I like the premise. We now have a bad guy, Tezcatlipoca. Is there something she must do? Is there an artifact she must retrieve? A quest she must complete? In order to defeat the bad guy I just ask because that will help us understand the story and help you cRead more

    I see where you are going with this.
    And I like the premise.

    We now have a bad guy, Tezcatlipoca.

    Is there something she must do?
    Is there an artifact she must retrieve?
    A quest she must complete?

    In order to defeat the bad guy

    I just ask because that will help us understand the story
    and help you create a concise logline.

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  3. Posted: February 16, 2016In:

    After a car crash leaves him unable to walk and dying of thirst, an inventor and his physically-disabled cousin must traverse the harsh Australian desert using only her electric wheelchair.

    Richiev Singularity

    This is a good start, I like what I've read so far... But then I am a big fan of the movie 'Walkabout' so I'm probably a bit biased towards movies about people being stranded in the outback. I guess the only thing I would ad would be. Is there anyway you could up the ante. such as, they have to be bRead more

    This is a good start, I like what I’ve read so far… But then I am a big fan of the movie ‘Walkabout’ so I’m probably a bit biased towards movies about people being stranded in the outback.

    I guess the only thing I would ad would be. Is there anyway you could up the ante. such as, they have to be back by a certain time. A ticking time clock or a specific goal they must achieve driving them forward.

    If not, that’s alright. I do think there is room for a great story here.

    Hope that helps, good luck with this!

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