1. Posted: January 31, 2016In:

    In a future where cannibalism is normal and widespread, a praised chef, who has a life changing encounter with a man about to slaughtered for food, seeks the reversal of the neighborhood food policy while the local government and community try to uproot the restaurant that is threatening their lifestyle.

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    Here is an attempt to cut the word count: "After he encounters a man about to be slaughtered for food, a famous chef of human cuisine has a change of heart and causes a national uproar when he refuses to cook the man."

    Here is an attempt to cut the word count:

    “After he encounters a man about to be slaughtered for food, a famous chef of human cuisine has a change of heart and causes a national uproar when he refuses to cook the man.”

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  2. Posted: January 29, 2016In:

    An aging songwriter used to be wildly successful, but lost his fame when the inspiration for all his songs, his wife, left him. Now, he has been kidnapped by an aspiring singer, who is giving him 3 months to write a great album for the young singer to steal. Having been unable to write anything good for years, the aged star must try to make his ex-wife fall back in love with him, in order to regain his writing ability and save his life.

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    Richiev Singularity

    I ?have to agree with Tony, his example says the same thing but with a third of the word count.

    I ?have to agree with Tony, his example says the same thing but with a third of the word count.

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  3. Posted: January 27, 2016In:

    A lonely man in witness protection receives word that his estranged father is dying, and so he must travel back to his home state without being detected by those who want him dead, in order to say goodbye before his father?s time is up.

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    Is the movie about the road trip home? If that's the case you have a good logline... if not, you may want to re-write.

    Is the movie about the road trip home? If that’s the case you have a good logline… if not, you may want to re-write.

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