1. Posted: August 24, 2015In:

    Two narcissistic TV presenters host televised death in a darkly comic indictment of infotainment

    Richiev Singularity

    This is not a logline. What you have described is a situation not a story. You need an inciting incident a lead character a goal for the lead character and something standing in the way If you have a bit of irony that is good as well.

    This is not a logline. What you have described is a situation not a story.

    You need an inciting incident
    a lead character
    a goal for the lead character
    and something standing in the way

    If you have a bit of irony that is good as well.

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  2. Posted: August 20, 2015In:

    In a world run by machines, a timid young woman – holding a vital secret – must regain her ability to speak before everything she loves is destroyed.

    Richiev Singularity

    "In a world run by machines" Does this mean, the world is fully automated, Cars, restaurants, manufacturing, everything is run by machine? Or does it mean, Machines are the masters and humans are the slaves... Also, this girl has a secret and needs to regain her voice. Why doesn't she write down theRead more

    “In a world run by machines”

    Does this mean, the world is fully automated, Cars, restaurants, manufacturing, everything is run by machine?

    Or does it mean, Machines are the masters and humans are the slaves…

    Also, this girl has a secret and needs to regain her voice. Why doesn’t she write down the secret and show somebody.

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  3. Posted: August 15, 2015In:

    A vengeance-driven PI hires an intellectual cat-burglar to help her investigate a murder that links a multinational tech giant to a notorious cybercriminal.

    Richiev Singularity

    You should tell us what he is seeking vengeance for.

    You should tell us what he is seeking vengeance for.

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