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  1. Posted: August 6, 2015In: Public

    Three kids who are self proclaimed ‘kings of the school” get their comeuppance when a kid they bullied along with the principal posts embarrassing and inappropriate videos to facebook and youtube.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on August 6, 2015 at 9:41 am

    Is the lead character one of the three 'kings' of the school?

    Is the lead character one of the three ‘kings’ of the school?

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  2. Posted: August 2, 2015In: Public

    A seemingly well adjusted 29 year old film maker is forced to face his own insecurities when forced to produce a movie on teenage female self esteem

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on August 3, 2015 at 12:36 pm

    If possible you should try for a more proactive lead character in the logline. ?? While making a documentary about teenage self esteem, a seemingly stable filmmaker is inspired to ask out his high school crush who he was too insecure to approach in High School.? ?? Obviously your logline will be difRead more

    If possible you should try for a more proactive lead character in the logline.
    ??
    While making a documentary about teenage self esteem, a seemingly stable filmmaker is inspired to ask out his high school crush who he was too insecure to approach in High School.?
    ??
    Obviously your logline will be different, however I believe the lead; instead of ?forced to face his insecurities? should be ?inspired to act?? (Do this thing that once scared him)
    Good luck, hope that helped.

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  3. Posted: August 2, 2015In: Public

    A seemingly well adjusted 29 year old film maker is forced to face his own insecurities when tasked with producing a movie on teenage female self esteem

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on August 3, 2015 at 12:34 pm

    If possible you should try for a more proactive lead character in the logline. ----- "While making a documentary about teenage self esteem, a seemingly stable filmmaker is inspired to ask out his high school crush who he was too insecure to approach in High School." ----- Obviously your logline willRead more

    If possible you should try for a more proactive lead character in the logline.
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    “While making a documentary about teenage self esteem, a seemingly stable filmmaker is inspired to ask out his high school crush who he was too insecure to approach in High School.”
    —–
    Obviously your logline will be different, however I believe the lead; instead of ‘forced to face his insecurities’ should be ‘inspired to act’… (Do this thing that once scared him)

    Good luck, hope that helped.

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