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After the death of his niece, an alcoholic thrill-seeker has psychotic delusions, coercing himself into vigilanteism.
I am not sure you can coerce yourself
I am not sure you can coerce yourself
See lessCaught in flagrante with a woman and ordered to consider his future, a faithless priest travels to his great-aunt?s country house where he must confront his beliefs as he unravels the mystery behind a series of demonic possessions overrunning the nearby town.
"When a desperate mother asks him to investigate the demon possession off her daughter, a disgraced priest ignores church's moratorium on exorcism and vows to to save the child."
“When a desperate mother asks him to investigate the demon possession off her daughter, a disgraced priest ignores church’s moratorium on exorcism and vows to to save the child.”
See lessA group of nerdy teen boys who are sick of being picked on by the bigger kids and being rejected by the hot girl decide to shoot up the school danc
'A group of,' isn't personal. You should single out a main character and then give us a specific event. After all if he's been picked on his entire life, why now? What event changed things. ----- "When the school bully humiliates him in front of his secret crush, a high school loser vows to get reveRead more
‘A group of,’ isn’t personal. You should single out a main character and then give us a specific event.
After all if he’s been picked on his entire life, why now? What event changed things.
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“When the school bully humiliates him in front of his secret crush, a high school loser vows to get revenge at the school dance where his nemesis is to be crowned homecoming king.”
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So now we have a specific character and a specific even. Your story will be different of course, however your logine should concentrate on a single main character to make it personal.
Hope that helps, good luck with this!
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