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After stealing a prototype drug synthesizer, a confused teen and an older war veteran think they’ve got it made, but their world falls apart after several dangerous drug gangs and corporate interests come looking for the prototype.
"A teen troublemaker steals a prototype drug synthesizer, to provide free medicine for those in need, but must contend with a greedy drug company who will stop at nothing to keep the price of medicine skyrocketing."
“A teen troublemaker steals a prototype drug synthesizer, to provide free medicine for those in need, but must contend with a greedy drug company who will stop at nothing to keep the price of medicine skyrocketing.”
See lessAfter stealing a prototype drug synthesizer, a confused teen and an older war veteran think they’ve got it made, but their world falls apart after several dangerous drug gangs and corporate interests come looking for the prototype.
Does either of these characters have a goal? A dream? Someone they need to help? The drug synthesizer seems more like a means to an end. They need the synthesizer in order to pay for... [example] very expensive cancer treatment (To use goal from a popular TV show) You hint that the leads think they,Read more
Does either of these characters have a goal? A dream? Someone they need to help?
The drug synthesizer seems more like a means to an end. They need the synthesizer in order to pay for… [example] very expensive cancer treatment (To use goal from a popular TV show)
You hint that the leads think they, ‘got it made’ but what does ‘got it made’ look like to the lead characters?
Does ‘got it made’ mean being able to pay off a mortgage? To buy a wedding ring for a fiance? Move to Tahiti to paint?
I think if the characters had a tangible goal it would help make this logline more compelling.
See lessHistory was born out of the fog of war, as they say, it left the Santa Marta shipyards during the 30s in its first patrols of the ship, someone was seen on the starboard one day during night practices ASW they heard footsteps alarmed the entire crew lighting spotlights when realizing that it was a woman they asked her who she was she did not answer when under the admiral of the casemate / bridge she asked her through a megaphone she answered making the gesture of a butler At your service Mr. Admiral padilla
Who is the lead character? What is their goal? What is standing in their way? By those questions, I mean, after reading a logline those three things should be clear to the reader.
Who is the lead character?
What is their goal?
What is standing in their way?
By those questions, I mean, after reading a logline those three things should be clear to the reader.
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