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Tasked to infiltrate a country of male supremacy, Lilly must suppress her rebellious nature to seize stolen technology in order to earn her freedom; but what else must she sacrifice on her mission to freedom?
Or to put it another way. The mission should be bigger than just herself. Success should be earning the freedom of more than just her. And I don't see that story element as the logline is currently written.
Or to put it another way. The mission should be bigger than just herself. Success should be earning the freedom of more than just her.
And I don’t see that story element as the logline is currently written.
See lessTasked to infiltrate a country of male supremacy, Lilly must suppress her rebellious nature to seize stolen technology in order to earn her freedom; but what else must she sacrifice on her mission to freedom?
This logline is written in kinda an oddly circular way. The leads goal is to earn her freedom But the reason her freedom is in danger is that she snuck into a country ruled by oppressive men. So if she hadn't snuck into the country in the first place, she wouldn't have to earn her freedom.
This logline is written in kinda an oddly circular way.
The leads goal is to earn her freedom
But the reason her freedom is in danger is that she snuck into a country ruled by oppressive men.
So if she hadn’t snuck into the country in the first place, she wouldn’t have to earn her freedom.
See lessGuided by their inspirational French teacher, a diverse group of adult students escape the backdrop of modern-day West London and find new meaning in their lives by exploring Frenchman Jean Giono’s celebrated short story ‘The Man Who Planted Trees’ about one man’s hope for humanity via his generosity to nature.
Not an easy concept to write a concise logline for. I also agree with variable, what does 'exploring' Jean Giono's book look like on screen. ----- "Inspired by his French teacher, a West London student and his classmate's vow to do one good deed a day in spite of pushback from his father who believeRead more
Not an easy concept to write a concise logline for.
See lessI also agree with variable, what does ‘exploring’ Jean Giono’s book look like on screen.
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“Inspired by his French teacher, a West London student and his classmate’s vow to do one good deed a day in spite of pushback from his father who believes no good deed goes unpunished.”