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A proud father loses his Crop Dusting business after 09/11 shutdowns, and addiction threatens his dignity; his only redemption may cost him his life as stealing his repoed plane could do more than break the bank.
Keep the logline to the main storyline: Also, you should add a face to the antagonist: When "This guy" shuts down his business, a crop duster and his wayward son must steal his plane from impound in order to stick it to the government and those who want to steal his freedom!"
Keep the logline to the main storyline:
Also, you should add a face to the antagonist:
When “This guy” shuts down his business, a crop duster and his wayward son must steal his plane from impound in order to stick it to the government and those who want to steal his freedom!”
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In a logline, you want to avoid using phrases that can mean two different things. "After losing her friend" I can't tell if that means, her friend has wandered off, or if her friend has died. as in "Sorry for your loss" "After her friend has been killed in an abandoned building..." "After her friendRead more
In a logline, you want to avoid using phrases that can mean two different things.
“After losing her friend”
I can’t tell if that means, her friend has wandered off, or if her friend has died. as in “Sorry for your loss”
“After her friend has been killed in an abandoned building…”
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Tasked to infiltrate a country of male supremacy, Lilly must suppress her rebellious nature to seize stolen technology in order to earn her freedom; but what else must she sacrifice on her mission to freedom?
Thanks, that bit of backstory helps me understand the story better
Thanks, that bit of backstory helps me understand the story better
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