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A young man sees his dead girlfriend through near death experiences.
From reading this logline, there doesn't seem to be a goal, conflict nor plot. I assume that isn't the case, so you might want to add those elements to the logline.
From reading this logline, there doesn’t seem to be a goal, conflict nor plot. I assume that isn’t the case, so you might want to add those elements to the logline.
See lessMisopedist Captain James Hook must confront his tortured past when he is forced to rescue a group of children held hostage by the demon boy, Peter Pan.
I definitely like the premise. ---- "When his daughter is spirited away by Peter Pan, Captain Hook is forced to return to Neverland in order to rescue his daughter all while confronting the demons of his past." ----- Or maybe it's his son who is kidnapped since the story will involve the lost boys.
I definitely like the premise.
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“When his daughter is spirited away by Peter Pan, Captain Hook is forced to return to Neverland in order to rescue his daughter all while confronting the demons of his past.”
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Or maybe it’s his son who is kidnapped since the story will involve the lost boys.
Misopedist Captain James Hook must confront his tortured past when he is forced to rescue a group of children held hostage by the demon boy, Peter Pan.
One of those children should be his. That would personalize the story.
One of those children should be his. That would personalize the story.
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