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  1. Posted: April 16, 2015In: Public

    When a deadbeat wakes up trapped in a alternate reality, he is shocked to discover he's there to help a small resistance take down an alternate version of himself who rules with seemingly God like powers.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 17, 2015 at 12:18 pm

    Good re-write Nir

    Good re-write Nir

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  2. Posted: April 16, 2015In: Public

    When a deadbeat wakes up trapped in a alternate reality, he is shocked to discover he's there to help a small resistance take down an alternate version of himself who rules with seemingly God like powers.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 17, 2015 at 7:06 am

    When a deadbeat wakes up trapped in a alternate reality-- When a deadbeat is transported to an alternate reality he is shocked to discover-- He discovers he's there to help a small resistance take down an alternate version of himself-- Me must help a resistance overthrow an alternate version of himsRead more

    When a deadbeat wakes up trapped in a alternate reality– When a deadbeat is transported to an alternate reality

    he is shocked to discover– He discovers

    he’s there to help a small resistance take down an alternate version of himself– Me must help a resistance overthrow an alternate version of himself.

    who rules with seemingly God like powers– who rules with godlike powers

    However I would switch the order around just a little
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    “When a deadbeat’s transported to an alternate reality, he discovers in this universe he rules with tyrannical God like powers and to save the people he must help the resistance overthrow the alternate version of himself.”
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    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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  3. Posted: April 16, 2015In: Public

    A homicide detective goes on the run to prove his innocence after he?s framed for murder by a malevolent police cyber-intelligence.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on April 16, 2015 at 9:21 am

    "When the scientist who he put on death row has seemingly risen from the grave, a hard nosed detective disobeys his skeptical chiefs orders and pursues the madman at the risk of his career."

    “When the scientist who he put on death row has seemingly risen from the grave, a hard nosed detective disobeys his skeptical chiefs orders and pursues the madman at the risk of his career.”

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