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9 years after the sanguinary massacre of the royal family of demons, planned by the United States, Barbara, one of the two sisters who escaped the massacre, seeks revenge and is in search to find her 10 year old sister, who was later abducted by the government of the United States, because of her sister's godly black magic abilities that could be used to turn the United States into a worldwide empire and to resurrect Goddess Isis, of Babylon. 17 year old terrorist Barbara forces the son of the president of the United States to betray his own country and join her on the expedition to find her sister, which leads to the revelation of the grotesque plans the United States (Illuminati) has up its sleeve and the end of everything.
This is more of a synopsis than a logline, a logline should one sentence and about 25-30 words long. As for the idea, my first question is, why now? The bloody massacre happened nine years ago. Why didn't 'Barbara' (Weird name for a Demon) get revenge then or after 5 years or after 6 years... Why noRead more
This is more of a synopsis than a logline, a logline should one sentence and about 25-30 words long.
As for the idea, my first question is, why now? The bloody massacre happened nine years ago. Why didn’t ‘Barbara’ (Weird name for a Demon) get revenge then or after 5 years or after 6 years… Why now?
Once you know the “Why now” The logline should fall into place.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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In most movies where there is an unpopular teen, they have a quirky but equally unpopular friend, Mean Girls would be an example. However in this case the 'friend' wouldn't necessarily have to work at the theme park. In fact the friends death/disappearance could be the reason the lead joins the trooRead more
In most movies where there is an unpopular teen, they have a quirky but equally unpopular friend, Mean Girls would be an example.
However in this case the ‘friend’ wouldn’t necessarily have to work at the theme park. In fact the friends death/disappearance could be the reason the lead joins the troop in the first place, to investigate from the inside.
However I wrote two versions of a logline, one with a friend as the inciting incident one without.
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