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When a vindictive cyber-terrorist steals nuclear activation codes, a distrusting special agent must use an experimental machine to enter his mind and retrieve them before he instigates a global conflict.
"When the nuclear codes are stolen, a special ops team leader has 12 hours to enter the mind of a vindictive cyber-terrorist's and delete his memory or the nukes will destroy Los Angeles the home of his wife and baby girl." ----- 1: Ticking clock 2: be specific to which city 3: make the stakes persoRead more
“When the nuclear codes are stolen, a special ops team leader has 12 hours to enter the mind of a vindictive cyber-terrorist’s and delete his memory or the nukes will destroy Los Angeles the home of his wife and baby girl.”
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1: Ticking clock
2: be specific to which city
3: make the stakes personal for the lead character
When a vindictive cyber-terrorist steals nuclear activation codes, a distrusting special agent must use an experimental machine to enter his mind and retrieve them before he instigates a global conflict.
"When the nuclear codes are stolen, a special ops team leader has 12 hours to enter the mind of a vindictive cyber-terrorist's and delete his memory or the nukes will destroy Los Angeles the home of his wife and baby girl." ----- 1: Ticking clock 2: be specific to which city 3: make the stakes persoRead more
“When the nuclear codes are stolen, a special ops team leader has 12 hours to enter the mind of a vindictive cyber-terrorist’s and delete his memory or the nukes will destroy Los Angeles the home of his wife and baby girl.”
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1: Ticking clock
2: be specific to which city
3: make the stakes personal for the lead character
"When her seafaring father goes missing, a headstrong girl who grew up upon stories of the sea, disguises herself as a boy and joins the crew of a Phoenician trading galley to discover clues to her dads whereabouts."
Rutger; I like the idea of adding 'one of her fathers trading galleys' because I see her father as a successful Phoenician trader. It also gives the crew a reason to help her on her quest when they inevitably discover she's a girl. Out of loyalty and friendship with her father they take on her questRead more
Rutger; I like the idea of adding ‘one of her fathers trading galleys’ because I see her father as a successful Phoenician trader.
It also gives the crew a reason to help her on her quest when they inevitably discover she’s a girl. Out of loyalty and friendship with her father they take on her quest to discover what happened to him.
As for the time frame, I was thinking around 400 BC. but I am flexible on that.
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