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  1. Posted: December 6, 2014In: Public

    A mysterious boy is on the run after having his identity found out, will he escape from the evil prospect of the hunters chasing him every second.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 6, 2014 at 8:16 am

    1: escaping hunters would be far more exciting than escaping the prospect of hunters. 2: If the inciting incident is the boys identity revealed, you should tell us what that identity is in your logline. Such as: After he's discovered to be the rightful heir to the throne of England. After he's discoRead more

    1: escaping hunters would be far more exciting than escaping the prospect of hunters.

    2: If the inciting incident is the boys identity revealed, you should tell us what that identity is in your logline.

    Such as:

    After he’s discovered to be the rightful heir to the throne of England.
    After he’s discovered to be the Anti-Christ.
    After he’s discovered to be the bastard child of Adolf Hitler.

    Then you can tell us what he must do to evade the hunters.

    Hope the helped, good luck with this!

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  2. Posted: December 6, 2014In: Public

    A mysterious boy is on the run after having his identity found out, will he escape from the evil prospect of the hunters chasing him every second.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 6, 2014 at 8:16 am

    1: escaping hunters would be far more exciting than escaping the prospect of hunters. 2: If the inciting incident is the boys identity revealed, you should tell us what that identity is in your logline. Such as: After he's discovered to be the rightful heir to the throne of England. After he's discoRead more

    1: escaping hunters would be far more exciting than escaping the prospect of hunters.

    2: If the inciting incident is the boys identity revealed, you should tell us what that identity is in your logline.

    Such as:

    After he’s discovered to be the rightful heir to the throne of England.
    After he’s discovered to be the Anti-Christ.
    After he’s discovered to be the bastard child of Adolf Hitler.

    Then you can tell us what he must do to evade the hunters.

    Hope the helped, good luck with this!

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  3. Posted: December 4, 2014In: Public

    When a young bride gets cold feet, her grandmother who has multiple ex-husbands is the only one who can save the day

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 6, 2014 at 8:09 am

    If the daughter is the lead character then you should give her a goal, or something she wants or needs. If the grandmother is the lead character, the logline should be told from her perspective. An example of the story told from the Grandmothers point of view: ----- "After her granddaughter get's coRead more

    If the daughter is the lead character then you should give her a goal, or something she wants or needs.

    If the grandmother is the lead character, the logline should be told from her perspective.

    An example of the story told from the Grandmothers point of view:
    —–
    “After her granddaughter get’s cold feet, a free spirited grandmother recounts the ecstasy and tribulation of her own love life which led to meeting and losing the love of her life.”
    —-

    Hope that helped!

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