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When a young bride gets cold feet, her grandmother who has multiple ex-husbands is the only one who can save the day
Who is the lead character, the bride or the Grandmother? While at first glance it seems like the bride would be, however it is the Grandmother who has the goal, (saving the day) and seems to be moving the plot forward.
Who is the lead character, the bride or the Grandmother?
While at first glance it seems like the bride would be, however it is the Grandmother who has the goal, (saving the day) and seems to be moving the plot forward.
See lessWhen a young bride gets cold feet, her grandmother who has multiple ex-husbands is the only one who can save the day
Who is the lead character, the bride or the Grandmother? While at first glance it seems like the bride would be, however it is the Grandmother who has the goal, (saving the day) and seems to be moving the plot forward.
Who is the lead character, the bride or the Grandmother?
While at first glance it seems like the bride would be, however it is the Grandmother who has the goal, (saving the day) and seems to be moving the plot forward.
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1: You haven't given the lead character a goal. This is causing problems in your logine. (Unless the Sunday school teacher is the lead character who has the goal of stopping the girl) 2: Because you say she is home schooled you don't need to tell us she is 'young' You should give us a better adjectiRead more
1: You haven’t given the lead character a goal. This is causing problems in your logine. (Unless the Sunday school teacher is the lead character who has the goal of stopping the girl)
2: Because you say she is home schooled you don’t need to tell us she is ‘young’ You should give us a better adjective that tells us more about her personality: a feisty home schooled girl; a determined home schooled girl: a repressed home schooled girl… as an example.
3: Because your character doesn’t have a goal, we don’t know what the Sunday school teacher is trying to stop.
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“After she discovers a recipe to summon a demon, an introverted home school-er plots to destroy the bullies who’ve tormented her, but must evade an rabid Sunday school teach who believes you must not suffer a witch to live.”
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Hope that example helps, yours will be different of course but by adding a goal, “Destroy her bullies” we now understand why a home schooled girl would want to summon a demon.
Good luck!
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