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  1. Posted: November 27, 2014In: Public

    Death, the grim reaper, is fired from his job and must now do the one thing he has next to no knowledge of – get a life!

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 28, 2014 at 3:52 am

    Death, the grim reaper, is fired from his job and must now do the one thing he has next to no knowledge of ? get a life! ------------------------------------------- Oddly enough, as short as this logline is, it uses too many words. If you cut the extra words, you could add a few things that could heRead more

    Death, the grim reaper, is fired from his job and must now do the one thing he has next to no knowledge of ? get a life!
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    Oddly enough, as short as this logline is, it uses too many words. If you cut the extra words, you could add a few things that could help the logline.
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    Death, the grim reaper (Repetitive, don’t need to say it twice.)
    When Death….

    is fired from his job (What else are you going to be fire from but a job… so you don’t need to say it)
    is fired…

    and must now do the one thing he has next to no knowledge of ? get a life!
    he must do what he has no knowledge of- get a life!
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    “When the death is fired (because of this reason) he has one week to learn the true meaning of life if he’s to get his old job back.”
    —–

    Hope that helped, good luck with this!

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  2. Posted: November 21, 2014In: Public

    "A strikingly handsome and intelligent man uses his talents to make deals happen in favor of his employers. But the seemingly harmless game changes when he meets his peer. A man that turns out to be a very dangerous superior."

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 22, 2014 at 1:49 pm

    I like the idea, but I am curious what happens if he fails? What are the stakes?

    I like the idea, but I am curious what happens if he fails? What are the stakes?

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  3. Posted: November 21, 2014In: Public

    "A strikingly handsome and intelligent man uses his talents to make deals happen in favor of his employers. But the seemingly harmless game changes when he meets his peer. A man that turns out to be a very dangerous superior."

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on November 22, 2014 at 1:49 pm

    I like the idea, but I am curious what happens if he fails? What are the stakes?

    I like the idea, but I am curious what happens if he fails? What are the stakes?

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