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"A young?credulous technology student who needs money fast agrees to take care of a blind old man, but the job is not at all what the student anticipated, when the retired bank robber asks for help with his last heist to avenge the arch rival who made him blind"
insomniatheatre says: When a retired blind bank robber asks a broke technology student for help, to uses his skills to get revenge on his arch rival; for the price of paying his tuition though college.? ----- In this logline the retired blind banker is the lead character, if this is the case it is aRead more
insomniatheatre says:
When a retired blind bank robber asks a broke technology student for help, to uses his skills to get revenge on his arch rival; for the price of paying his tuition though college.?
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In this logline the retired blind banker is the lead character, if this is the case it is a better logline.
If not you should always tell the logline from the point of view of the lead character.
See less"A young?credulous technology student who needs money fast agrees to take care of a blind old man, but the job is not at all what the student anticipated, when the retired bank robber asks for help with his last heist to avenge the arch rival who made him blind"
insomniatheatre says: When a retired blind bank robber asks a broke technology student for help, to uses his skills to get revenge on his arch rival; for the price of paying his tuition though college.? ----- In this logline the retired blind banker is the lead character, if this is the case it is aRead more
insomniatheatre says:
When a retired blind bank robber asks a broke technology student for help, to uses his skills to get revenge on his arch rival; for the price of paying his tuition though college.?
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In this logline the retired blind banker is the lead character, if this is the case it is a better logline.
If not you should always tell the logline from the point of view of the lead character.
See lessBullying intensifies social isolation at a tender age in Marcos and leads to uncontrolled and subversive consequences.
This logline is vague. 1: It would help if you put a face on the bully, a specific bad guy, 2: You should also give the lead character some sort of goal, even if it isn't a socially acceptable one. 3: Consequences are great, but you should be specific what those consequences are. A few more specificRead more
This logline is vague.
1: It would help if you put a face on the bully, a specific bad guy,
2: You should also give the lead character some sort of goal, even if it isn’t a socially acceptable one.
3: Consequences are great, but you should be specific what those consequences are.
A few more specifics and this should turn into a pretty good logline.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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