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Bullying intensifies social isolation at a tender age in Marcos and leads to uncontrolled and subversive consequences.
This logline is vague. 1: It would help if you put a face on the bully, a specific bad guy, 2: You should also give the lead character some sort of goal, even if it isn't a socially acceptable one. 3: Consequences are great, but you should be specific what those consequences are. A few more specificRead more
This logline is vague.
1: It would help if you put a face on the bully, a specific bad guy,
2: You should also give the lead character some sort of goal, even if it isn’t a socially acceptable one.
3: Consequences are great, but you should be specific what those consequences are.
A few more specifics and this should turn into a pretty good logline.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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I believe the playboy has been selfish all his life. At some point he realizes taking away a woman from her fiance when he's about to die is selfish. So his final act should be to let her go.
I believe the playboy has been selfish all his life. At some point he realizes taking away a woman from her fiance when he’s about to die is selfish. So his final act should be to let her go.
See lessAn emotional comedy about a dying playboy in his 30s, planning to host his own funeral, who falls in love for the first time, with an engaged woman.
I believe the playboy has been selfish all his life. At some point he realizes taking away a woman from her fiance when he's about to die is selfish. So his final act should be to let her go.
I believe the playboy has been selfish all his life. At some point he realizes taking away a woman from her fiance when he’s about to die is selfish. So his final act should be to let her go.
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