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After becoming a cyborg and inheriting the memories of others before, a human man enlists the aid of an alien cyborg intelligence to prevent the extinction of the human race.
I believe the inciting incident would be the attack on earth. ----- "When the earth is attacked by Aliens. A human Cyborg, with an eon of memories must team with an Alien AI to repel the invaders set on pillaging the planet of all it's resources." ----- (Or if your threat to earth is different use tRead more
I believe the inciting incident would be the attack on earth.
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“When the earth is attacked by Aliens. A human Cyborg, with an eon of memories must team with an Alien AI to repel the invaders set on pillaging the planet of all it’s resources.”
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(Or if your threat to earth is different use that in place of what I wrote)
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessAfter becoming a cyborg and inheriting the memories of others before, a human man enlists the aid of an alien cyborg intelligence to prevent the extinction of the human race.
I believe the inciting incident would be the attack on earth. ----- "When the earth is attacked by Aliens. A human Cyborg, with an eon of memories must team with an Alien AI to repel the invaders set on pillaging the planet of all it's resources." ----- (Or if your threat to earth is different use tRead more
I believe the inciting incident would be the attack on earth.
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“When the earth is attacked by Aliens. A human Cyborg, with an eon of memories must team with an Alien AI to repel the invaders set on pillaging the planet of all it’s resources.”
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(Or if your threat to earth is different use that in place of what I wrote)
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
See lessAfter hearing her father's death, a transfer student must conquer the temptations of a secret fraternity, before its ancient founder possesses her mind and body.
There isn't a connection in your logline between her fathers death and the secret fraternity. As a result the logline is a bit awkward. Here would be an example of an inciting event meshing with the rest of the logline. ----- "When her best friend disappears after joining an exclusive sorority, a trRead more
There isn’t a connection in your logline between her fathers death and the secret fraternity. As a result the logline is a bit awkward.
Here would be an example of an inciting event meshing with the rest of the logline.
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“When her best friend disappears after joining an exclusive sorority, a transfer student must infiltrate the organization in order to discover it’s dark secret.”
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In your logline you should explain how her fathers death connects the lead character joining a fraternity (Sorority)
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
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