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  1. Posted: September 18, 2014In: Public

    A teenage lumberjack wannabe struggles with his ironically hipster appearance as he figures out what it means to be a man.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 19, 2014 at 6:22 am

    Story is conflict. The conflict in your story; Your lead character struggles with his appearance. Is there any other conflict you could use for your logline? Because a movie about a guy struggling with his hipster appearance isn't compelling. Maybe there is a person in the story he has conflict withRead more

    Story is conflict.

    The conflict in your story; Your lead character struggles with his appearance.

    Is there any other conflict you could use for your logline? Because a movie about a guy struggling with his hipster appearance isn’t compelling.

    Maybe there is a person in the story he has conflict with, If that is the case I would use that as the conflict in your logline.

    Hope that helped, good luck with this.

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  2. Posted: September 18, 2014In: Public

    A teenage lumberjack wannabe struggles with his ironically hipster appearance as he figures out what it means to be a man.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 19, 2014 at 6:22 am

    Story is conflict. The conflict in your story; Your lead character struggles with his appearance. Is there any other conflict you could use for your logline? Because a movie about a guy struggling with his hipster appearance isn't compelling. Maybe there is a person in the story he has conflict withRead more

    Story is conflict.

    The conflict in your story; Your lead character struggles with his appearance.

    Is there any other conflict you could use for your logline? Because a movie about a guy struggling with his hipster appearance isn’t compelling.

    Maybe there is a person in the story he has conflict with, If that is the case I would use that as the conflict in your logline.

    Hope that helped, good luck with this.

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  3. Posted: September 10, 2014In: Public

    Abducted as a small child, a college athlete's sadistic mother threatens his championship hopes when he sets out to find his long-lost dad.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 12, 2014 at 8:18 am

    "Faith is tested," is abstract, "threatening his championship hopes" gives the reader better stakes. He wants to find his father but at the risk of losing the championship. (Which means the whole world to him) You simply need to tell us how his mother plans to ruin his chance at a championship,

    “Faith is tested,” is abstract, “threatening his championship hopes” gives the reader better stakes. He wants to find his father but at the risk of losing the championship. (Which means the whole world to him)

    You simply need to tell us how his mother plans to ruin his chance at a championship,

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