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  1. Posted: August 27, 2017In: Romance

    When a wretched teenage Jewish boy in Auschwitz camp realizes his infatuation with Hitler?s daughter since their encounter in his village, by sneaking in her villa he stands to confess his love and induce her to save the Jews escape from the Germans.

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    Added an answer on August 27, 2017 at 3:35 am

    My first reaction is to wonder if he loves her from afar? Because how would these two ever have their paths cross? ?It's maybe a little bit vague on that note. ?Do they know each other? Also, how would he stand to confess his love and to who? ?To her? ?Again, how would these two ever be in a situatiRead more

    My first reaction is to wonder if he loves her from afar? Because how would these two ever have their paths cross? ?It’s maybe a little bit vague on that note. ?Do they know each other?
    Also, how would he stand to confess his love and to who? ?To her? ?Again, how would these two ever be in a situation where they might talk?
    Other than that, I think it sounds like a really interesting story and a unique idea. ?I would watch the movie.

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  2. Posted: August 16, 2017In: Drama

    When a high school dance instructor is accused of molesting the principal?s son, a public dance carefully choreographed to expose the real perpetrator ? to everyone?s surprise, the school?s biggest donor ? inspires school officials to rename the school?s auditorium honoring the accused.

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    Added an answer on August 23, 2017 at 12:50 pm

    I think what the others are saying is to state what the hero must do and not what he ends up doing. ?This seems like a very odd movie plot to me though, to choreograph a dance rather than go to the police and even to watch a dance that might act out a molestation - it sounds too uncomfortable for meRead more

    I think what the others are saying is to state what the hero must do and not what he ends up doing. ?This seems like a very odd movie plot to me though, to choreograph a dance rather than go to the police and even to watch a dance that might act out a molestation – it sounds too uncomfortable for me to want to tune in, much less pay money to see.

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  3. Posted: August 18, 2017In: Drama

    After a senseless violent act, a quiet man willingly risks losing his home and family relationships for love of his wife and memory of his daughter.

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    Added an answer on August 23, 2017 at 12:46 pm

    Way too vague for me. ?Your responses say you made changes, but maybe I'm not seeing them...

    Way too vague for me. ?Your responses say you made changes, but maybe I’m not seeing them…

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