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An estranged successful movie director and a hotshot film producer must stop a rival Head of Studio from buying out their companies.
Estranged from who? (or whom, I don't know) ?This maybe lacks some stakes. ?Why would the average person care if some movie company gets bought? ?Is there romance involved? ?Betrayal? ?I would be more likely to root for them if they were maybe down on their luck, but it says they're successful. ?SoRead more
Estranged from who? (or whom, I don’t know) ?This maybe lacks some stakes. ?Why would the average person care if some movie company gets bought? ?Is there romance involved? ?Betrayal? ?I would be more likely to root for them if they were maybe down on their luck, but it says they’re successful. ?So I find myself not really caring. ?Seems like more of a corporate transaction than anything else.
See lessA troubled young woman, tying to outrun an oppressive past, flees to the outback, only to find herself in the way of an ancient malevolent spirit awakened by a thirst for revenge and hell bent on destruction.
I like it. ?It gets the job done. ?I know what I'm in for.
I like it. ?It gets the job done. ?I know what I’m in for.
See lessAfter interrupting a blackmail hand-off in a grimy Scottish pub, American expat Charley finds herself with a bag of cash in one hand and an encrypted USB in the other and is forced to outrun local thugs, a killer-for-hire and the head of a multinational while trying to escape the country.
This sounds like it could be a promising comedy but I realize you may have written it as action. ?There is no need to reveal her specific name and you give other minor details that are less important in a log line. ?I would say she is on the run... but from three villains? ?I don't see that working.Read more
This sounds like it could be a promising comedy but I realize you may have written it as action. ?There is no need to reveal her specific name and you give other minor details that are less important in a log line. ?I would say she is on the run… but from three villains? ?I don’t see that working. ?Maybe she just doesn’t know who to trust? ?Anyway, she finds herself on the run from hopefully just one villain with the USB and the money. ?I hope that points you in a new direction of making it clearer and less wordy.
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