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London freezes and collapses into ruin; the few who survive find a trail leading them to corruption on the highest scale: The disaster didn?t kill them, but what they find just might.
It begins really well and sets up a very striking world and obvious problem. ?But then it gets really vague. ?Who is the main character or is there one? ?I would think their goal would be to survive, not to uncover corruption since it seems it is too late to reverse whatever corruption has caused thRead more
It begins really well and sets up a very striking world and obvious problem. ?But then it gets really vague. ?Who is the main character or is there one? ?I would think their goal would be to survive, not to uncover corruption since it seems it is too late to reverse whatever corruption has caused this. ?If there is hope of undoing the ruin, that should be noted. ?Lastly it says what they find might kill them, but how? ?I think it’s more likely that who they find will kill them? ?It doesn’t really name a villain or a hero is I guess what I’m trying to say.
See lessWhen two personalities, one a meek family man the other a covert assassin, discover they share the same mind and body, they must find the organisation that merged them together to reverse the process before the increased brain activity overloads their mind.
Very interesting. ?Makes me want to know more and how you may have pulled this concept off. ?It's a little wordy though. ?I will attempt to shorten it: When a meek family man and a covert assassin discover they share the same body, they must force a mysterious organization to reverse it before the iRead more
Very interesting. ?Makes me want to know more and how you may have pulled this concept off. ?It’s a little wordy though. ?I will attempt to shorten it: When a meek family man and a covert assassin discover they share the same body, they must force a mysterious organization to reverse it before the increased brain activity overloads their mind.
See lessI also wonder what this mind overload would mean. ?Would it kill him? ?Or make him insane? ?It might be worth noting the stakes.
After an unruly party, a college dropout must share a paper route with his 12 year old overachieving neighbor to cover the damage.
It is funny and I get a feel from it that it is a comedy. ?I would say burnout shares a paper route which is just less wordy. ?It kind of makes me say ?"and?" ?I guess some would say it needs some kind of high stakes. ?Does he just pay off the damage and go back to being a burnout? ?I feel like therRead more
It is funny and I get a feel from it that it is a comedy. ?I would say burnout shares a paper route which is just less wordy. ?It kind of makes me say ?”and?” ?I guess some would say it needs some kind of high stakes. ?Does he just pay off the damage and go back to being a burnout? ?I feel like there’s much more to it.
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