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  1. Posted: March 11, 2013In: Public

    An eskimo with a thirst for human flesh accidentally steals the identity of a popular quiz show host, leading to a one-of-a-kind spectacle of blood, blubber, and cash prizes.

    SydneyPaul
    Added an answer on March 11, 2013 at 2:22 pm

    Gold. Pure gold. Anyone who kills, eats, and then impersonates a game show host has got me completely on side. The new host of course should get the highest ratings of all. Just get the Coen brothers to direct, and I'll purchase my ticket. :)

    Gold. Pure gold. Anyone who kills, eats, and then impersonates a game show host has got me completely on side. The new host of course should get the highest ratings of all.

    Just get the Coen brothers to direct, and I’ll purchase my ticket. 🙂

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  2. Posted: March 11, 2013In: Public

    A former rodeo star unknowingly starts a rapport with a young man who is responsible for all of the violence that has suddenly gripped his small town.

    SydneyPaul
    Added an answer on March 11, 2013 at 2:11 pm

    This tells us the potential for conflict, but really leaves it at that. So this ex rodeo star and the youth strike up some kind of relationship, and the youth is responsible for violence....then what? What kind of violence? What is the clash? Is it whether rodeo star can steer youth away from crimeRead more

    This tells us the potential for conflict, but really leaves it at that. So this ex rodeo star and the youth strike up some kind of relationship, and the youth is responsible for violence….then what? What kind of violence? What is the clash? Is it whether rodeo star can steer youth away from crime or whatever?

    Some of this vagueness should be clarified if possible.

    CHeers

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  3. Posted: March 11, 2013In: Public

    A successful attorney returns to his home town for his mother?s funeral only to discover that his Alzheimer?s-stricken father is suspected of murder and must represent him in court. The ordeal becomes an emotional journey that makes him a better man.

    SydneyPaul
    Added an answer on March 11, 2013 at 1:50 pm

    This is fairly wordy...the second sentence in particular is mostly unnecessary (the ordeal makes him a better man is pretty much the arc we would assume). Should the attorney be 'successful'? If he was, we might be more inclined to think he should be able to deal with this ordeal, so the struggle woRead more

    This is fairly wordy…the second sentence in particular is mostly unnecessary (the ordeal makes him a better man is pretty much the arc we would assume).

    Should the attorney be ‘successful’? If he was, we might be more inclined to think he should be able to deal with this ordeal, so the struggle would not be so great. Perhaps it might be more of a challenge if he was a ‘struggling’ attorney? Or perhaps he is a ‘selfish’ attorney and the ordeal gives him perspective about the importance of family?

    Here is a suggestion which may have some use:
    “When a struggling attorney returns home for his mother?s funeral to find his Alzheimer?s-stricken father is suspected of her murder, he must wage the case of his life to save his family – and himself.”

    Also the title seems strange – it’s not about the judge is it, it’s about the lawyer and/or the case. Perhaps it could be called “The judgement” or…..?

    Cheers

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