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A hipster quest for "transcendent" duck tacos is derailed when a failed chef turned health inspector closes the duck truck down.
Oh - that makes more sense then
Oh – that makes more sense then
See lessA hipster quest for "transcendent" duck tacos is derailed when a failed chef turned health inspector closes the duck truck down.
Hi, It almost seems like the story is over before it begins. If perhaps the food truck drove cross country that would derail his quest and require your protagonist to venture out after it. If the food truck has been shut down though there doesn't seem like there's much he can do, unless the plot invRead more
Hi,
It almost seems like the story is over before it begins. If perhaps the food truck drove cross country that would derail his quest and require your protagonist to venture out after it. If the food truck has been shut down though there doesn’t seem like there’s much he can do, unless the plot involves him cleaning the kitchen to bring it back up to standard?
See lessAfter selling their souls to a devil the name of Black, tall-tale legends Pecos Bill and Slue-foot Sue must elude a hell bound fate as well as every cowboy trying to sell ?em out to that varmint.
Hi, Why do they risk losing their souls? Maybe you could be a hit more generic in your wording also. The men's names detracts the reader away from the story, which is also a bit unclear. Try to define your story - two men must to (what) when (who) comes after them. Good luck
Hi,
Why do they risk losing their souls?
Maybe you could be a hit more generic in your wording also. The men’s names detracts the reader away from the story, which is also a bit unclear.
Try to define your story – two men must to (what) when (who) comes after them.
Good luck
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