1. Posted: August 17, 2013In:

    Along with their pet turtle, a brother and sister duo encounter some of America?s most exciting historical figures while on a journey to collect jelly beans they accidentally spilled into a time portal.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher

    Hi, I tend to agree with dpg. If you look at the kids of today (ages 4+) they are 100% into technology - ipdas, DS, smart phones etc. Holding their interest requires a show that's informative, action packed, modern and fast paced. Sad but true. good luck.

    Hi,

    I tend to agree with dpg. If you look at the kids of today (ages 4+) they are 100% into technology – ipdas, DS, smart phones etc. Holding their interest requires a show that’s informative, action packed, modern and fast paced. Sad but true.

    good luck.

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  2. Posted: August 18, 2013In:

    The last shaman "Medicine Man" of the Peruvian Amazon Highland jungle, who cures his patients of terminal diseases using plants native to the Amazon Jungle.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher

    * that last line should read medicine man - what's his journey

    * that last line should read medicine man – what’s his journey

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  3. Posted: August 18, 2013In:

    The last shaman "Medicine Man" of the Peruvian Amazon Highland jungle, who cures his patients of terminal diseases using plants native to the Amazon Jungle.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher

    Hi, This tells us who your protagonist is and what he does (heals people) but it's not the story. What happens in the movie? Does someone try to destroy his way of life, does he have to help save someone integral to his tribe...tell us what journey this medicine has to go on in your story and why. GRead more

    Hi,

    This tells us who your protagonist is and what he does (heals people) but it’s not the story. What happens in the movie? Does someone try to destroy his way of life, does he have to help save someone integral to his tribe…tell us what journey this medicine has to go on in your story and why.

    Good luck

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