A shy guy tries to seduce a snobby girl during an awkward pre-arranged mating session between their chihuahua dogs. COMEDY SHORT

For a short I like the premise, two shy people meet to allow their dogs to mate, it's embarrassing so they engage in small talk while behind them you hear the mating noises.

As for the logline, this is a little tougher, the line, "Must deal with the situation" is not very specific. How does he specifically deal with the situation?

Is his objective to just get through the situation?

Is his goal to put his counterpart at ease?

Is his goal to get a date from the girl?

Anyway, I like this premise as a short or even just as a skit,? but you might want to add a specific or two, to the logline.

>>>A young man must deal

How, specifically?? His dog obviously has an objective goal.? What becomes his objective goal in response to that of his dog?

>>>A young man must deal

How, specifically?? His dog obviously has an objective goal.? What becomes his objective goal in response to that of his dog?