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Hey guys.
Admittedly, I'm just playing around while trying to figure out my FESTIVE FAMILY DRAMA. (I might have to abandon that one - I got ten pages yesterday before I realised the conflict isn't there. Also, the characters were underdeveloped. The whole thing, half-baked.)
Lets see...
A family man teams up with a priest to stop the ghost of a murderer, killing people in his town - a man he killed and whose murder he covered up.
A retired judge teams up with a priest to stop the ghost of a murderer - a man whose death he is responsible for, and who is bent on revenge.
I still like the "good, normal everyday family man" part. His flaw is that he killed someone and covered it up. He swallowed his own morals and ethics.
How can flesh and blood stop ghosts?? What's his m.o., his secret weapon, his game plan?
How can flesh and blood stop ghosts?? What's his m.o., his secret weapon, his game plan?