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Posted: January 10, 20162016-01-10T12:54:09+10:00 2016-01-10T12:54:09+10:00In: Comedy

When divorced businessman Mr Barton enquires about a hotel?s pay TV service he becomes frustrated by an annoying receptionist with an obsession for popcorn and the Adult Channel.

When divorced businessman Mr Barton enquires about a hotel?s pay TV service he becomes frustrated by an annoying receptionist with an obsession for popcorn and the Adult Channel.
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    1. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2016-01-10T13:30:20+10:00Added an answer on January 10, 2016 at 1:30 pm

      A logline doesn’t need to mention the main character’s name unless critical to the story like in a biopic or historical genre.

      Becoming frustrated is an emotion not an action, therefor, the logline description of the main action doesn’t provide any information about what the character will actually do in the film.
      In addition, no goal or inciting incident are specified and as a result no plot, as this is the primary function of a logline best to redraft with a specific inciting incident and goal in mind.

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2016-01-10T13:48:00+10:00Added an answer on January 10, 2016 at 1:48 pm

      Is this for a short, or a feature length film?? As Nir Shelter said, it’s kind of thin in terms of the basic elements for a logline.

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