When a nerdy Greek scholarship holder fall in love with his popstar fellow student, the young relationship goes through tough times as she is living in a celebrity bubble always busy when he needs her presence.
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When a nerdy Greek scholarship holder fall in love with his popstar fellow student, the young relationship goes through tough times as she is living in a celebrity bubble always busy when he needs her presence.
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Taken literally, the logline says he’s in love with her, but does not say his feelings are reciprocated. In which case,? the problem isn’t that she’s too busy, it’s that the love isn’t mutual.? I presume that intention is that the initial feelings are mutual.??? So I?suggest the logline needs a? polish ?to clarify the initial nature of their relationship, that the love is mutual.
And then a major ?complication ensues because of their diverse backgrounds, life styles and career goals.? What, specifically, is that complication??? “Goes through rough times” is vague.? What’s the visual on “rough times”??? Whatever that is, translate it into specific words.? What is the primary complication that arises that drives them apart, that gap in their relationship he must find a way to close?
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College? High School?
I like the idea of a nerdy greek and a popstar togheter but I can’t see a plot here. I make 2 suggestions: 1) figure out why exacly the greek NEED the support of his girlfriend. 2) figure out what is the main specific problem of their relationship.
So, the nerdy greek will have a clear goal and a clear obstacle to overcome. And that will be a story.